15-04-2019, 08:33 PM
Quote:royal starkayasareelover1
Story achi likhi hai but bohot hi illogic lagti hai, nidhi jaisi padhi likhi high society housewife jo sundar bhi hai aur jiski age bhi kam hai wo kaise ek adhed umar ke badsoorat admi ke jaal me phas sakti hai, agar woh desperate bhi hai to koi young ladka bhale hi woh gareeb ho aur nidhi akelepan me uske sath involve ho jaye to samajh ata hai lekin aap ne jis tarah uss budhe plumber ke sath nidhi ko jiss tarah se portrayed kiya hai woh baat pach nahi rahi, agar jabran bang hota to baat alag thi, jahan tak mai samajhta hoon ek aurat thukai se zyada apni pasand ko importance deti hai.
bro this story is not illogical nidhi is alone in his house...........aur Rakesh ne apni planning se uska makmali jism paya tha.............tumhara kehna sahi hai ki wo koi young ladke se bhi apna akelapan dur kar sakti..............
par tum story suru se padho nidhi ko andhere se darr lagta hai aur Rakesh ne apne plan ke mutabik sab sett kiya tha.....................nidhi darr ki wajah se Rakesh ka sath nibhati gayi aur baad mein jab Rakesh uske makhmali jism ko jee bhar ke pyar de raha tha tou nidhi ko bhi maja aane lag gaya.........akhir wo ek jawan khubsurat aurat hai............Rakesh budha aur badsurat hone ke saath saath ne nidhi ko ache se satisfy kiya tha ........................isliye nidhi use pasand karne lagi thi....