19-07-2021, 09:55 AM
(18-07-2021, 11:51 PM)Sush44 Wrote: Please update the story.. Story concept is really good.. Make slow seduction of shalini..don't try complicate things between shalini and her husband..also please describe the age and personality of other characters.. In politics there are more old aged peoples on top level.. So make them horny for shalini..don't make shalini character as submissive.. Keep her attitude like that.. Also not blackmail type thing..
You can add party type incident, dance, yoga like event also..
Thanks for comment. will update once i received sufficient comments/ ideas