14-07-2021, 03:42 AM
Really great plot.. and well written too..
But please don't mention Mani's age again in the story.. we know that he's gonna be just a young student in Jaya's class.. and mentioning his age in detail kinda ruins the feel of that.. hope u don't feel bad for pointing this out
Carry on with awesome updates, bro..
But please don't mention Mani's age again in the story.. we know that he's gonna be just a young student in Jaya's class.. and mentioning his age in detail kinda ruins the feel of that.. hope u don't feel bad for pointing this out
Carry on with awesome updates, bro..