12-07-2021, 07:11 PM
(12-07-2021, 05:24 PM)Bhikhumumbai Wrote: Nice story (continuation of Jaya. But The Carector Of stranger I Dont Like. Mack sure That He is watchan Only. "cpz new Carector spoil The story. and arrange the place of mani There are mahmud aur Abdul) Before her FIL going to Us. ( His Mother is working With Him So many year's and need him To study well so jaya teach him well also jaya got a Compny)
Hi,
Thank you for your comments and suggestions......
The characters of Mani, and the remaining will follow..... I don't wish to use the same names..... except for Mani and his character.
The stranger is a known person..... Jaya will understand about him very soon....
and about the Watchman, i am not writing it as Rahim's Character..... Please read the next update and you will get clarity....
I don't want to spoil the suspense by reveling the progress of the story before hand......
Thank You once again for you comments and suggestions......