12-07-2021, 02:54 AM
(12-07-2021, 12:10 AM)Edens Wrote: Story ka writer sabhi readers ko khush karna cahta hai.... Isiliye inka story ka plot kharab ho jata hai..... Ye story hai ek dark interfaith wala..... Ek hi dimag, ek hi idea se story hona chahiye tab jake nehi bhatakta ....Hope age ka story sahi disha me jayega.
Abhi mai is story ko sahi kar ke aage badta ho par next koi bhi story ka plot likhonga usi par puri story chalaonga bhatkonga nahi