10-07-2021, 04:34 PM
(10-07-2021, 03:21 PM)Johnyfun Wrote: Kahani kuch directionless ho gayi hai abhi tak itne update aur 14 page ke baad bhi kahani ka koi base nahi bana
Sharik ka hona ab story ko negative aur boring bana raha hai
Sex story mein sex to aage ya peeche aa hi jayega lekin itni mehnat ke Baad base to solid hona chahiye
Maine pahle likha hai thodi kahani shariq aur shaiza ke bich chalegi.... Aur jaldi shariq ko site mai karta ho...... Wait bus ek update ka aur kare... Sab clear kar donga