10-07-2021, 08:15 AM
(03-07-2021, 09:23 PM)Bregs Wrote: story is good lekin too many characters who don't have direct connect with story are making it slow n bogged down, thats why story seems stuck a particular point for too long because of vast stories running concurrently
Otherwise story writing n description of sex is marvelously hot n lusty
Bhai sabhi kiredar bahut hi mahtavpurn hai is liye unka hona anivary hai. Kyoki wahi sab ek mukhy patr ko us mukaam par le jaate hai, jahan ham uski kalpana karte hai. Is liye dhery banaye rakhe.
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The Master (The beginning of life) _ Running
Pyar - 100 baar Closed
Mera Ghar aur Main Closed
The Master (The beginning of life) _ Running
Pyar - 100 baar Closed
Mera Ghar aur Main Closed