Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[critic_honest]

Hi dear Author Krish,

I just wanted to suggest you a point regarding your writings.
No doubt that you are a brilliant writer and you always give logics behind the story and always proceed with a pace which actually makes it a erotica. But just a suggestion that I personally feel that you sometimes lack sexual tension in your updates. There have been instances where sexual tension was indeed felt but it do lacks if take the story as a whole. Please don't mind, I am just speaking my mind.
           Either you at instant provide with direct sex scene or there are just logical conversations which we do admire but sexual tension is also something which should be there in an erotica. I never meant it should be full of baseless sex or just sex ,I meant that if there is sexual tension developed , then it keeps the reader on the edge. It's not just sex scenes which actually arouse the most readers but the scenario how its happening. of course we can not manipulate the characters and personality of the characters.. its just that some scenarios makes it way more arousing than the actual sex scene.
I hope you get my point and don't take in opposite sense. 
Just wrote what I had in my mind....

Thanks