04-07-2021, 08:57 AM
(03-07-2021, 09:23 PM)Bregs Wrote: story is good lekin too many characters who don't have direct connect with story are making it slow n bogged down, thats why story seems stuck a particular point for too long because of vast stories running concurrently
Otherwise story writing n description of sex is marvelously hot n lusty
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