Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

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Krish thank you so much for reverting on the earlier made comment. It really means a lot when Author like you reverts back and it genuinely make us readers feel that we are connected to you

So now at present Anvita is slightly confused or could say have started to believe a little that Rajat's words for Atul are turning out to be true and that he gets slightly turned on when he witnesses or imagines Anvita with someone else.
Here a few readers believe that Atul is not at all cuckold but story line is forcing him to be one , But I strongly believe he has traits of being a cuckold but he has been fighting himself since the start and does not want to believe it(if only he could lower down his male ego , he would know the truth) .If we remember one incident where George had masturbated on Anvita's stomach and Atul after witnessing him did not even take a single step ,rather he was as usual normal with George after that. If we talk about reality , can anyone bear this happening right infant of him?? I am sure no one would and surely would at least take a step.(Although many would say its Atul's nature to be very understanding but deep inside we all know no one would take it in real unless he somewhere likes it)
He became all normal even after what he saw Varun and Anvita doing on that roof . Isn't he too normal after every scenario?? But yes we witnessed, he always gets equally excited after every event and forgets every mistake Anvita made. (Can a person in reality get that excited that too just after witnessing his own wife with other man ?? One can only bear it, if his body is somewhere liking it( Atul's conscience will take time to accept it because of his male ego) . Its his this little unknown excitement which stops him from taking any serious action each time.

But I really have to say this. If Rajat by chance is able to get into Anvita's pants just by making her believe that Atul is a cuck and Anvita doing with Rajat ,only because she is assuming that Atul must be enjoying watching her with him , and same goes for Atul that if he allows it but without his inner consent just for Anvita's sake that she somehow she would get a great sex , then this sex between Atul & Anvita would really be disappointing & disheartening to experience . There would be no sexual excitement in this scenario because Atul somewhere will get heartbroken and later on Anvita too will regret when she would come to know Atul had not enjoy it .
Don't you think , it would be enjoyable and erotic (for readers & for Atul as well) only if Atul himself also gets excited and turned now somehow ( That totally depends on author how to make it possible if he wants to), Otherwise it would feel like a indirect bang of Anvita by Rajat which is no fun .I feel Anvita at least should ask Rajat to corroborate his statement and should challenge him to prove his made statement about Atul getting excited watching her with other Men( she might unconsciously want this and may even hate herself for wanting it that Rajat's statement wishfully turns out to be true because we can see she lately is getting quite excited by the idea ). I just hope she does not turn into slut or there would be no fun.


Dear Author I want to share something here .We readers are coming here & reading this story to get excited and to get turned on with a good story script of course which you excellence at but at the end of story if we come to know that everything happened just because of a misunderstanding and everyone (Anvita & Atul) are crying, regretting at end, then it would rather creates sexual frustration among us readers because believe it or not ,we all are here to see Anita somehow getting fucked and not just once but multiple times without projecting her as Slut and with scenario full of content and logic which you have mastery on and only you are capable of doing it with your magical writing skills. I do not think anyone would want her to get saved at end because that was not our Moto to come on erotica section.
I agree emotions , sentiments , a good logical content are necessary to make a story epic but If everything is regretful from protagonist's view and we at the end of story get to hear that all ended well and Anvita got saved like some Bollywood story drama, ,then its would not be worth it. Honestly it would turn out to be sexually frustrating for readers because I don't think anyone would want Anvita to go clean and untouched . We expect all the content, drama, emotions but erotica is equally important part too concealing the image of Anita as it has been from start that is of a loving wife.

I am sorry if I sound in a complaining mode but Krish you say that you are entering into the last phase of the story but don't you feel most of the story actually went describing Atul's job related trips?? It felt we all were left craving to know what is currently happening at Anvita's end and that craving and curiosity left us frustrated.
I don't know but sometimes it has been a little sexually frustrating and honestly that "sexual tension" which Keeps you on the excitement brink while reading a story has been missing lately.( because who would understand more than you that more than sex , the scenario which lead to sex is the reason for real turn on)
whenever any make out or sex scenario comes in , it gets quickly finished without much details (except that car scene of Anvi & Varun). I have to say ,sexual tension is missing out a little here. (its my personal view)

Some things have been confusing like ,we have observed that Anvita is even capable of swallowing cum and the way she does it shows she must have had a good past behind her which made her pro at it otherwise its not possible for any girl to swallow so effortlessly. I am curious why Atul never asked this from Anvits. I would have been curious to know if I were in his shoes.( not for questioning or judging her but just to know ,because Anvita has been with Atul since college days so where did she learn to swallow) . She can't possibly learn with just one encounter with her professor and we all know she was not been intimate with Varun either before Atul met her. So this thing always makes me curious.

I am may be sounding agitated here and mostly after hearing that you are writing the last phase of the story ,I am feeling a little uneasy and sad because its just you who is solely the reason to come to story section of this site. The kind of content you write and the way you put in your efforts , it really shows how much you love your work. There is so much left in the story and it would be really sad to keep this thing in mind that we are in last phase of the story : (