27-06-2021, 03:35 PM
(27-06-2021, 02:03 PM)King Man Wrote: Bhai aage se story kahi se bhi uthauga to pahle story ziqr zaroor karuga ok
Waise ye story kaisi lag rahi .. . Aap logo ko
Acchi jaa rahi hai story par koshis karna bhai ki jyada se jyada apne likhne ki koshis karna......isse story mai romanch badhega....baaki aap likhte jaa hm sab aapke saath hai....
Rated ur story 3 star.....best of luck