24-06-2021, 10:38 PM
(24-06-2021, 01:30 AM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Ye kahani bahot sambhal kar likh raha ho... Kahi kuch gadbad na ho jai aur kahi iska plot kharab na ho jai.... Shazia ko par mai itni jaldi open nahi karonga sex hoga jaroor par kaise woh to mai shazia ki ha ya na mai batata rahonga
Lion king bro aapki saari kahani acchi hai... Aur jis kahani me aapko lagta hai plot bigad gaya hai uska new thread banakar sahi plot se kahani restart kardo... Aisa karne se aapki 1-2 kahani jo incomplete hai unko sahi raasta mil jayega....