24-06-2021, 12:56 PM
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(22-06-2021, 02:48 AM)qazmlp Wrote: Good start. Nice theme.
Hope you don't plan to copy the old Komal Birju story
Try and mAke your hindi more legible and mainstream...Some words I can't understand.
All the Best,otherwise.
phele tho bahi apka bhaut bahut shukriya. janta hoon bhai hindi lihkai thodi paidal hai hope you understand
bhai otherwise nhi samej ayi waise maine birju komal wali khani nhi padi hai please story ki link ho tho mhuje bhej de
hostka hai kuch idea mil jaye bahi.