23-06-2021, 05:25 PM
Slow buildups are the best form of writing for seduction stories and you are perfectly carrying it.
I was expecting 2.5 Virginity would involve Veda but I guess it was too early for me to conclude or still too early to write it off. However I'll skip if Velan is in for action with Veda (My aversion to Incest is why that is). I would have loved Sam to be taunted further but yeah, the character is an evolving one so whatever you have decided for her works fine
Eagerly looking forward to the Initial seasons of the chronology. I have been long waiting for how Sam played with the watchmen. Great writing bro. Keep it up!
I was expecting 2.5 Virginity would involve Veda but I guess it was too early for me to conclude or still too early to write it off. However I'll skip if Velan is in for action with Veda (My aversion to Incest is why that is). I would have loved Sam to be taunted further but yeah, the character is an evolving one so whatever you have decided for her works fine
Eagerly looking forward to the Initial seasons of the chronology. I have been long waiting for how Sam played with the watchmen. Great writing bro. Keep it up!
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