23-06-2021, 03:46 AM
(13-06-2021, 03:13 AM)pylode Wrote: Edens, kya laajawaab idea diya hai aapne! Bahut hidden talent hai aapke is lund roopi kalam mein!
Ab aage.... Silsila ab Tabassum ke ghar mein wapas aata hai. Ab kya tha, chudakkad Tabassum ghar mein hi apne saandon ko sukh prdaan karti hai. Loan interest maafi ke liye!
Patidev tho kuch kaam ke nahi rahe. Akhir ab Tabassum kya karen.
Kuch kaam ke nahin rahe? Yeh baat nahin hai, doston. Thaki hui biwi ki thakawat kaun dur karta hai, tango ke beech ke lathpath ghosla ko chus chus kar? Patnivrata patidev hi tho akhri sukh deta hai!
Jee, Lion King, aap nayi stori bhi start kar sakte hai yeh plot ke aadhar par. Aap ki talent ke saath tho stori bahut malaidaar banegi!
pylode
Mai agar ise continues karonga to 2nd part likh kar kyoki ab jaha se maine story chhodi hai waha se ise pakdna kathin kam hai