22-06-2021, 07:54 PM
(22-06-2021, 01:47 PM)writer Wrote: wow you really a big fan of this story. i can see that. surely i can change it for you my brother. just one thing. After that trip also there are many more trips and i was thinking the way you wrote. Those ideas are better to use in those future trips like Shimla, Singapore these two trips will come also after Rajasthan. So tell me now is it ok , if i use your way and idea in those trips then and let Rajasthan one remain the same or if u still want then i will change the Rajasthan one itself.
Why i said it to use your plan later because in Rajasthan she is new new coming under me nicely. so i have to do more and she is a bit shy as she coming out of her arrogance and high attitude nature. While later on when she will get comfortable and more open then it will be easy to use your idea and ways on her. Right now its a bit tough to use your idea on her as her character is so arrogant, sometimes still she dont listen me and gave me rigid attitue.
Yes bro u r right..even I had that thought in mind..that before this saree removal scene she has already done few exciting things like spitting in ur mouth and biting on chest.. And I think it will be good if u put it in upcoming episodes.. as I know this story only till Rajasthan trip..And one of the best part of the story is it's slow step by step built up...when things r like mystery...In fact it will be more exciting for me ..when it will appear in future trip or in any other event ,..all of which will be new to me..
So let it be like that 95% bro,let it be like that only.. I was waiting for this episode..to suggest this thing since 1st episode when u restarted the story...as it was sooo good..
The only 5% change for the love of that saree scene ..if u can make is... ""Just let her remove only hooks of her blouse"" before u tear her blouse n bra and quickly make her naked..
And thnxx bro for replying, liking my idea and accepting it..