22-06-2021, 02:27 PM
(20-06-2021, 03:48 PM)Samit_bhai Wrote: Very nicely written.. maine dekha kisi ne aapko incest (father se chudai) ka suggestion diya...plz aisa mat karo..this will.look weird and Shajia jo Bhiku se nahi chudna chahti to apne baap se kaise.. abki baar aisa ho ki Shajia Bhiku se to chud hi chuki hai..ab use koi aur mile to woh bhi thoda initially resist kare lekin baad mein enjoy kare..ek truck/bus/auto wala scene aa jaye to accha hoga..jaise woh akele bus mein ja rahi jo and bus mein koi tharki sharabi dehati buddha chaddhi jaye aur ise convince kare kuch karne ko..Ap jante hi hai mere ameer heroine ke liye low classog aate hai par maine kafi aage tak socha hai is story me liye.... To mai aisa likhonga jise pad kar sab satisfy ho aur mere mitro ko ye na lage ki mai kisi ek mitr ki fantasy likh raha ho ye update jo likha hai woh sahi plot par likha hai.... Kyoki shazia ke pass kharche ke paise nahi hai aur woh bina apne josm ka soda kare paisa lena chahati hai... Kiya se help nahi le sakti.... To kiya hoga shazia saaf bach jayegi ya khud hi fas jayegi..... Dekho
Jis tarah Shajia ne Bhiku ke kahne pe cheeze ki thi..woh bahut accha part tha..waisa hi kuch dekhne ko.mile to.maza aa jaye..
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