21-06-2021, 04:54 PM
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(21-06-2021, 10:56 AM)BukkaaReddy Wrote: If you don't mind me saying this,
While the Lovemaking is going on between a couple, you are taking story to some other part of story, which spoil the Sex thrill from that lovemaking.
Story is showing under Thriller Genre, it has to change to Adultary
All my earlier stories had been under Adultery Genre so I decided to write a different type of story. In my earlier stories since it was mostly about a woman or women being seduced and committing adultery it was easier to keep that erotic aspect going on throughout. There are plenty of stories under the theme of adultery including cuckold and incest (the stories with the most response) in this site. If I go on that route this would just be another one on those themes. Maybe my next story can be on adultery but I want this story to be different, though in the story there are characters who have and/or are committing adultery but this has to come woven with the story. Hence there won't be continuous descriptions of the sex act in this story. I have started this as a thriller so let me finish this story as such. I'm aware that it would disappoint some of you and am sorry for that but I'll try to do maximum justice to this story in the genre I have chosen to write it in.
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