[critic_honest]

Hello Krish, 

please don't make Meera an object for sex games of Desai and his friends.
I think that Meera deserves something better and more serious than Desai, who gets 
women "only" by his "money and dealings" in his bed. Both his behavior and appearance are 
not prestented to impress and attract women who are self-confident and believe in themselves.
His only weapon is his money, with which he buys people and especially women to live out 
his sexual urges.

Let Meera have some level and short romantic affairs (in harmony and knowledge with Krish)
with others (maybe from former acquaintances from the study times) or spontene acquaintances 
(like for example, Jay in the train) that are serious and on a higher level than what the 
arrogant and tactless Desai tends to offer.

Ultimately, this is an erotic story, (which is very well narrated, and has high gloss eroticism in it) 
accordingly will (... and should) sexual and erotic acts (with the main characters Meera & Krish) 
in which outsiders and strangers occur, but 
WITHOUT being dominated and humiliated ...

This is my request to the author,
I hope that he will listen to it.

In this sense
best regards
Lollobionda

One of the best part of the Author is that he writes as per his wish and I think we should let him do that.

I agree Meera doesn't deserves to become a 'sex doll' which could be used by Desai's friends and I certainly don't think Meera would ever do that (Again, she is not like Ananya) but I feel at least Desai deserves to have Meera.This man has been trying real hard relentlessly and I guess he has been our central character of the story from the start. All this will be in vain and a big disappointment to say if nothing ever happens between Meera & Desai.. BUT yes it should be consensual and not some blackmail/humiliation or something like that. 

we've seen Krish/Meera never regrets Jai's incident in Train or Tejas or Arman and its because there was no humiliation caused to Krish by these people.For Krish they were all safe as they never hurt his dignity or boasted their win over Meera. Desai should have understood that by now if he is not that dumb.He should first understand Krish if he ever has to get to Meera. Krish is the only key to Meera.

 Also ,I'm  pretty sure that every reader here  must by now be quite curious to know if Meera actually enjoyed Desai that night or not..OR if she will really enjoy Desai or not if anything happens between them.we all wanna know if he was really boring that night as Meera says.Moreover, I'm even more curious to see how Krish's body would react when he witness any act between Meera and Desai together, May it be only private conversation between them and not sex.
If these all questions go unanswered, then it would be all be a total disappointment for us that why we even read the story on the first hand and surely the same feelings for Meera's husband as well as he would never know what actually happened that night or Meera will actually enjoy Desai or not.

But as I said, our author here has all planned it out  and he writes what he has to write..and we always welcome him.