Exploitation of Innocent cousin sister AMMU
(19-06-2021, 05:27 PM)Samsonraj Wrote: As per reviews it seems many are not happy with the last post... it came as a flow to get her mom more involved.. of course Ammu is the primary topic.. didn't prepare & could not update for this week.. will try after some time.. Thanks everyone.. If any others interested also you can continue..

Why last update I don't find much interested was Ammu's point of view got missed out even being the main character. Say if you would have included an update in between after they reached back from village and ammu explaining on the things she saw between her strict mother and manu and happened to her  with her father during bath in village, then last update would have blend in. Also another deviation you could have made was after the first fuck, manu could have woke up in middle of night and gone to Ammu's room...

Just shared my view point and thoughts.. after all it's your story and we are just the reader... Expecting an update soon
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RE: Exploitation of Innocent cousin sister AMMU - by listener098 - 19-06-2021, 07:04 PM



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