12-04-2019, 08:37 AM
1. Each time atul goes to rajat's flat without knowing him, he forget something to know rajat about his visit.
2. Inverter incident had lot of loopholes like A house interverter can't give backup in whole decorated house on occasion of party with all extra electricity on.
3. Many incident which even author can't justify to overdone that you simply put cuck touch there because when cuck comes each logic goes background like watching super heroes movies whether anything could be happen.
4. How easily radhika and ridhima agreed happily to become object of atul's pimp act. They both knowing that without logic ready to pleased him to get atul's client satisfed by pimping themself.
5. George blackmailing, while rajat is failed to get result of blackmailing randomly many time but george simply said "I know what you did last night" and she is ready to get fuck with him.
6. After tasting foud dicks since marriage with atul it is laughable to object with rajat.
7. Varun blowjob act in car, very very fantasy without any logic preparation or logic.
8. Getting car trip with manjot in front of office building just after 2 meeting with him. You don't do this in work place while you easily could use meeting room of office to talk to client if you are in compound of office.
9. george's masturbation on anvita when their first visit to george house.
10. Shreyas seduction suddenly, even with varun is very unnatural after having freindship with him for years.
11. prithvi's first stay in her house without any reason.
12. Detailed discussion with rajyavardhan (FIL) with anvita about anvita sex life with varun and her adultery/Infidelity while not a single line communicated with atul.
You hide many detail of act like what happened with shreyas in party gone with atul where you hide their whole night adventure.
May be you are planning to explain all of them in ending to justify that.
2. Inverter incident had lot of loopholes like A house interverter can't give backup in whole decorated house on occasion of party with all extra electricity on.
3. Many incident which even author can't justify to overdone that you simply put cuck touch there because when cuck comes each logic goes background like watching super heroes movies whether anything could be happen.
4. How easily radhika and ridhima agreed happily to become object of atul's pimp act. They both knowing that without logic ready to pleased him to get atul's client satisfed by pimping themself.
5. George blackmailing, while rajat is failed to get result of blackmailing randomly many time but george simply said "I know what you did last night" and she is ready to get fuck with him.
6. After tasting foud dicks since marriage with atul it is laughable to object with rajat.
7. Varun blowjob act in car, very very fantasy without any logic preparation or logic.
8. Getting car trip with manjot in front of office building just after 2 meeting with him. You don't do this in work place while you easily could use meeting room of office to talk to client if you are in compound of office.
9. george's masturbation on anvita when their first visit to george house.
10. Shreyas seduction suddenly, even with varun is very unnatural after having freindship with him for years.
11. prithvi's first stay in her house without any reason.
12. Detailed discussion with rajyavardhan (FIL) with anvita about anvita sex life with varun and her adultery/Infidelity while not a single line communicated with atul.
You hide many detail of act like what happened with shreyas in party gone with atul where you hide their whole night adventure.
May be you are planning to explain all of them in ending to justify that.