17-06-2021, 06:41 PM
(17-06-2021, 01:09 PM)Saravroman Wrote: very glad to hear from a long-time reader, mdnkmr131! Appreciate the nice words & congrats offered!
It’s a fantastic feedback and well-articulated.
The message and details of your comment without missing any part of the plot speaks volumes of your attention to detail!
It also gives me a chance to address this issue to all my Dear Readers.
Writers Thought
As oft mentioned, I’m a Newbie and this is my first story.
So, I am still figuring the right combination of story elements.
In the first 100 chapters, the ratio of plot, erotica & hardcode sex is 40%, 40% & 20%.
There are a lot of non-erotic details but it laid the foundation for all the future erotica & sex scenes.
The details and description of the family, apartment, Venky Mama aspects and Office all laid for the grand setup.
Also about 40% of the content is non-sex erotica, like the chapters involving Samantha and Syed Ji,
Sam and Watchmen, Chai’s imaginations, dirty thoughts of other characters, etc. This has its kink and appeal.
I agree that the hardcore sex itself is less, only 20%.
All the Sam scenes you accurately described + non-Sam sex scenes (Kaju, Solomon/DIL, Yasmine, Noor)
In the next 100 chapters (which I hope to complete with all your support),
I am thinking the ratio of plot, erotica & hardcode sex will be 20%, 40% & 40%
So less plot details (since the base is already set) & same level of erotica & double the number of sex scenes with increasing kink/dirtiness.
And off course double and triple and quadruple SLUTTY SAM!
I am hoping this is to the liking to all readers including you.
Thanks for sharing your valuable feedback! Keep sharing your fantasies/comments/feedback!
U la la........ We are getting to enjoy for next 100 chapters.... Fantastic... It will definitely happen.
Little wish - Make the PLot - Erotica - Hardcore Sex like 9% 45% 46% -
This part is simply feels music to ear (and cock) - [And off course double and triple and quadruple SLUTTY SAM!]