Fantasy Samverse: Samantha & Chai Novel - Ayurvedic Treatment For My Wife
very glad to hear from a long-time reader, mdnkmr131! Appreciate the nice words & congrats offered!
 
It’s a fantastic feedback and well-articulated.
The message and details of your comment without missing any part of the plot speaks volumes of your attention to detail!


It also gives me a chance to address this issue to all my Dear Readers.
 
Writers Thought
 
As oft mentioned, I’m a Newbie and this is my first story.
So, I am still figuring the right combination of story elements.
 
In the first 100 chapters, the ratio of plot, erotica & hardcode sex is 40%, 40% & 20%.
There are a lot of non-erotic details but it laid the foundation for all the future erotica & sex scenes.
The details and description of the family, apartment, Venky Mama aspects and Office all laid for the grand setup.
Also about 40% of the content is non-sex erotica, like the chapters involving Samantha and Syed Ji,
Sam and Watchmen, Chai’s imaginations, dirty thoughts of other characters, etc. This has its kink and appeal.
I agree that the hardcore sex itself is less, only 20%.
All the Sam scenes you accurately described + non-Sam sex scenes (Kaju, Solomon/DIL, Yasmine, Noor)

In the next 100 chapters (which I hope to complete with all your support),
I am thinking the ratio of plot, erotica & hardcode sex will be 20%, 40% & 40%
So less plot details (since the base is already set) & same level of erotica & double the number of sex scenes with increasing kink/dirtiness.
And off course double and triple and quadruple SLUTTY SAM!
I am hoping this is to the liking to all readers including you.
 
Thanks for sharing your valuable feedback! Keep sharing your fantasies/comments/feedback!
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:50 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:50 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:50 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:50 AM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:50 AM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:52 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:52 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:52 AM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:53 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:54 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 10:54 AM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 11:27 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 11:27 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 11:28 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 11:28 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 11:28 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 11:43 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 07:47 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Ranjith27 - 16-01-2021, 08:55 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 16-01-2021, 11:33 PM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Kalyan143 - 17-01-2021, 01:36 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 01:48 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Kalyan143 - 17-01-2021, 01:36 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 01:49 AM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 12:40 PM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 04:11 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Ranjith27 - 17-01-2021, 04:32 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 09:08 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Raviraj45 - 17-01-2021, 05:14 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 09:09 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 09:28 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 09:45 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by revathi47 - 20-04-2021, 07:53 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 20-04-2021, 06:33 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 09:49 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Raviraj45 - 17-01-2021, 09:59 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 17-01-2021, 10:07 PM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Mr Strange - 17-01-2021, 11:38 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Babyma - 17-01-2021, 11:52 PM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Kalyan143 - 18-01-2021, 01:18 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Ranjith27 - 18-01-2021, 06:59 AM
RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 18-01-2021, 03:23 PM
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RE: Samantha & Chai - (ATFM) Wife - by Saravroman - 18-01-2021, 03:37 PM
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