15-06-2021, 01:16 AM
The writer might return or may not return. I wanted to register my thought honestly.
This is not one of those stories that is carefully thought and crafted.
It has its moments and feels good only as long as the reading flow is uninterrupted which makes regular updates important for this story.
With long gaps, the logic holes are pretty much visible and the scenes with Kabali and the story setting seems very forced rather than naturally inducing.
These kind of moment based stories need to continue to the momentum because unlike skillfully crafted stories, the kinky episodes are it's strengths and it has to be continuous.
Nevertheless, if the story continues please remember to update frequently else it is better left discontinued as this story is not engaging with longer gaps and the plot holes feel awkward
This is not one of those stories that is carefully thought and crafted.
It has its moments and feels good only as long as the reading flow is uninterrupted which makes regular updates important for this story.
With long gaps, the logic holes are pretty much visible and the scenes with Kabali and the story setting seems very forced rather than naturally inducing.
These kind of moment based stories need to continue to the momentum because unlike skillfully crafted stories, the kinky episodes are it's strengths and it has to be continuous.
Nevertheless, if the story continues please remember to update frequently else it is better left discontinued as this story is not engaging with longer gaps and the plot holes feel awkward