11-04-2019, 06:52 PM
Quote:Meriaiza
Mast story hai. Shuru main bas theak hi thi aur lag raha tha ke predictable sa bang wala climax hoga lekin planning aur seduction wale updates kamal ke the aur unse story achi ho gayi hai. Lakin writer bhi tabhi dhela par gaya hai. Writer sir aese cliffhanger daal kar break nahi lete. Thoda time nikalo aur ab sexual encounter ko complete karo 2-3 badi updates main.