01-06-2021, 08:40 PM
Hello lion king....sorry apne thread par busy hone ke kaaran is behtareen story ko padh nahi paaya....aap bhut accha likh rahe ho...or umeed hai ki aap aage bhi aisa likhte rahenge...mai koi suggestion nahi dunga aapko kyuki aap khud ek behtareen writer hai bas ek req jaroor karoonga ki story ko thoda long hi rakhna or seduction jyada rakhna....baaki aap jyada behtar jaante hai