Misc. Erotica काजल, दीवाली और जुए का खेल (completed)

[Jyoti Singh]

Hi, Mai es story ks update kab se wait kr raha tha. Nice update. Actually, es story ka plot hi jaburdust h aur ye jua ka situation , uff. If you dont mind. Kya aap es scene ko yahi end kr sakte ho. I mean rana n kajal ks ye scene ap 3- 4 baar de sakte ho hr baar dono thoda thoda aage badhte jaye. N pls kajol ko only rana tak hi rakhna. Kajal thodi sharmati n rana use ready krta sx ke liye to thek hota. Dono kesav se chupkr sex krte n kajal rana ke sath bahar b ja sake like his place , or somewhere else to thek rahta. Pls dont mind jo mujhe laga wo maine suggest kiya, story apki h n style b apki honi chahiye.. ignore this msg if dont like..thanks

thank you for your suggestion but the story is already written, completed and Ready to upload. So at this stage it is very hard to change. But anyway thanks for your suggestion and i appreciate it.