Revathi - An angel

[PingpongDingdong]

I am not sure where to start off and how to start off. I really liked your imagination and narrative skills during most of the scenes in the story. But I am not understanding why few random characters are introduced, just like the stranger in the story. This piece has gone totally off board. I don’t understand why would Revati entertain every single person she comes across. Is she going to be portrayed as a slut? I am demeaning the word slut here, but I’m bit confused why do We see such irrelevant characters in the story which doesn’t add weight or any meaning to it. If Revati is being shown as a slut, there’s no point of innocence. Even a woman of free spirit doesn’t entertain every single person she comes across. A driver , A stranger in the studio, The project client , who else more?!!  Because of all of these interim characters, is actually bringing down the story in term of quality. A woman who shares her body just for money doesn’t share feelings at all with her clients. If there’s no emotion, or if Revati is shown as a slut, the exciting factor is lost. I’m sorry to say this. The gripping factor of the story is literally oscillating from highest to the lowest possible. Probably the writer needs some time to think about the plot. Please take your time Mate. But try to put your best not to lose or deviate from the main plot of the story. I felt like you got lost a bit this time. I’m sure you’d make this of a great kind. Please take no offence . We hope the best from you .