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Non-erotic SHUBHAM
#11
update 7


Pichla update mei aapna dekha kaisa AS aur Mariana ka bich shart lagti hai mera liya, vahi dusri taraf mei aur Willy hum Neel Gagan Tower sa GALLERY OF ANTIQUES ka liya nikal gaye tha aur sath mei lekar chala tha ek aur saval.......

Ab AAge......

SHubham: Hum kuch der chalna ka baad ek choti si gali ka bahar khada tha jaha par ek bada sara board laga tha WELCOME TO THE GALLERY OF ANTIQUES...... mei uss jagah ko dekh kar Willy sa bola, kya huma iss gallery mei jana hai, isko dekh kar to nahi lagta hai ki yaha humara kaam ka kuch saman milega.... AApna to bola tha ya galli apna aapmei khaas hai, yaha duniya ka har saman milta hai.....

Aaye aapko bhi jo samna dikh raha tha uska bara mei bata de..... Actually samna ek 5ft chodi gali thi, jaha  do log ek sath bhi nahi khada ho sakta tha aur ussi gali mei baith kar kuch log kuch saman sell kar raha tha..... vaha sabhi jagah gandagi hi gandagi thi.... uss jagah ko dekh kar koi bhi yahi bolega ya to koi sadi si jagah hai....

Willy: Thoda sabar kro mera dost, abhi hum GALLERY OF ANTIQUES mei nahi ghusa hai..... phele hum usmei ghus jaye uska baad kahana kya meina kuch galat kaha tha......[Image: nbnQxGxaAfwHAzhfSeLZ.png]?

Essa kaha kar Willy aage bada aur mei uska picha aur hum uss laga board ko cross karka gallery mei khada tha..... vaha pahuch kar Willy na vahi rakha ek chota sa pathar ko do baar clockwise aur ek baar nicha daba diya,,,,, uska essa karta hi vaha sab kuch smoke mei badal gaya.... aur huma kuch dikhna band ho gaya.... smoke ki vajah sa meina aankhe band karli aur kuch ek minute baad Willy na mjhe aankhe kholnako kaha....

Shubham: Aankh kholta hi mei Willy sa kahana laga.... tm pagal ho kya, kya kar raha tha...... abhi itna bolkar mei samna dekha to mera dimak na kaam karna hi band kar diya aur mei jo abhi Willy ko kahana vala tha vo mera moooohhhh mei raha gaya aur mera moooohhh itna bada khul gaya tha ki ek baar ka liya to chota haathi bhi usma sama jaye.......

Willy : Welcome to the Gallery of Antiques mera dost, ab bolo kya kaha raha tha tm ki mera dimak kharab ho gaya hai ya yaha kuch saman nahi milega...... ha bolo bolo......

SHubham: Willy ki kahi baat jaisa meina suni hi nahi thi, bus mei to aankh faada sab kuch dekh raha tha..... mjhe to samaj hi nahi aa raha tha ki ya kaisa ho sakta hai.... jo mei dekh raha tha.....

Chaliya hum bhi dekhta hai essa kya khaas tha gallery mei....... sabsa pheli aur important baat ya ki jab hum gallery mei ghusa tha tab Sun ek dum humara sir ka upar tha, par ab jaha hum tha vaha abhi raat ho rahi thi, sooraj ki kirno ka koi namo nishaan hi nahi tha....( ya mjhe baad mei pata chala ki yaha humsha essa hi rahata hai..... yaha sooraj ki kiran kabhi nahi aati hai......), dusri baat jab hum yaha aaye tha tab sooraj nikala hua hona ki vajah sa kaafi garmi thi, par yaha hawa thandi thi aur saath hi baraf bhi gir rahi thi jo pura 2 mahina girti hai..... par sabsa chokana vali baat ya thi ki huma vaha sardi nahi lag rahi thi, kyunki vaha ka temparature hu sabko apni body ka hisab sa adjust hi lagta hai....... inn sabmei jo sabsa jada chokana vali baat thi vo ya ki jo gali abhi keval 5ft ki chodi thi ab vo kumsa kum 50ft chodi ho gayi thi.... aur vaha par chaaro taraf ujala ka liya lantern jal raha tha..... par ya lantern koi aam lantern nahi tha isma roshni aa to aag jalna ki vajah sa rahi thi par aag kiss chij sa jal rahi thi ya baat kisi ko nahi pata hai...... bus vo lantern humesha hi jali rehati hai....... humara dono taraf ki dewaar ab ek dum sa glass mei badal gayi thi aur usma sa dikhayi deti duniya ki ek sa ek besh kimati chija jo alag alag roshni mei chamak rahi thi..... aur sabsa badi baat vaha kissi bhi chijj ko dekhna yaha chuna ka liya aap bs uss chij ka samna khada ho kar aaj uss chij ka bara mei socho aapko yaha ehsaas hoga ki aap uss chij ko touch karka feel kar raha ho aur vo chij aapka haath mei hai.....

Abhi mei bs sab chija dekhna mei khoya hua tha ki.....

Willy :kya hua kaisi lagi jagah,,,, hai na ek dum khubsurat..... par abhi iski asli khubsurati dekhna ka samay nahi aaya hai..... duniya ka do khaas din par ya jagah itni khubsurat ho jati hai ki yaha sa jana ka man nahi karta hai..... Par chalo ab hum aage chalta hai..... kyunki huma kaam iss antique gallery mei nahi hai..... huma to phele jana hai Loham galli mei aur uska baad jana hai Chhaliya Gali mei.... aur itna kaha kar vo aage bad gaye aur mei picha picha..... aur vo aage chalta hua mjhe uss gallery ka bara mei aur bhi kahi baate batata ja raha tha.....

Hum chalta chalta ek choraye par aage..... vaha khada hokar unhona mjhe bataya dhyan sa dekhna aur yaad rakhna ab, sabsa pheli baat mera saath hi chalta rahana aur kahi bhi essa hi mat ruk jana varna tm yaha kho jaoga, ya jagah itni badi hai ki tmhai dhundta dhundta meri umar nikal jaygi par hum nahi mil sakega...... dusri baat jo tm samna vali gali dekh raha ho na kabhi bhi bhul kar uss gali mei mat jana kyuki vo gali choro, lootera, aur demons aur black magic ka use karna valo ki hai..... vaha jana ka baad tmhara kya hoga ya batana ka liya aaj tak koi vaha sa nahi aaya hai.....

Shubham: WIlly ki baat sunkar to meri fatkar haath mei aa gaye...... mjhe sach mei vo jagah dekh kar dhur sa hi ehsaas ho gaya ki agar mei kabhi galti sa bhi vaha fas gaya to kya hoga.....[Image: nbnQxGxaAfwHAzhfSeLZ.png] Sath hi sath meina soch liya mei kabhi bhi iss gallery mei akela nahi aaunga, kuch chaiya hoga to kissi ka sath hi aaunga varna mei to nahi aaunga....

Abhi mei sab soch rha tha itni der bhi Willy na aur na jana kya kya bataya uss gallery ka bara mei jo mei sun hi nahi saka... PAr last ki kuch baate sun saka vo ya thi ki jo galli mera left most side hai.... uss galli ko Loham gali kahata hai.... uss gali ka naam yaha ka famous Sword maker Mr. Loham ka upar rakha gaya tha..... iss gallery mei duniya bhar ki talwar, dhanush, chaku, bhala, armor aur na jana kya kya weapons milta hai..... phir dusri ek gali ki taraf dekh kar kaha ya hai, Challiya gali, iska naam essa isliye hai kyunki yaha par har tarah ka thag paaye jata hai.... aur yaha bhut sambhal kar chalna padhta hai..... par iss galli mei hi duniya ki sabsa acha writer ki kitaab milti hai jo duniya mei aur kahi nahi milti hai...... abki unhona mera sidha haath ki taraf vali gali ki taraf dekh kar kaha iss gali ko vasa to Maya nagri kahata hai, par iska naam hai Shalaka Nagar..... iss gallery mei duniya bhar ka magician ka kaam ka saman aur unki jaadu karna ki chadi milti hai..... iss galli ka bara mei hum baki baat aur kabhi karega aur vaha tmhai lekar kabhi aur chalunga, abhi hum yaha sa chalta hai,...... apni Lohan Galli mei, jaha huma tmhara weapons aur armor lena hai..... dekhta hai tmhai kiss category mei chunna gaya hai, abhi vo kuch bolta aur usse phele meina ek gali ki taraf ishara karka pucha iss galli ka kya naam hai aur yaha kya milta hai, bataunga par abhi nahi kuch der mei......
itna kaha kar vo aaga chal deta hai aur mei unka picha humsha ki tarah par iss baar mei ek dum savdhan hokar chal raha tha, meri najar sirf Willy ko hi dekh rahi thi aur mei bs uska picha chala ja raha tha, kyunki mei yaha khona nahi chata tha..... Loham galli mei essa kuch khaas nahi tha kyunki har taraf bs shops hi shops thi jaha par har tarah ka weapons aur unsa related material mil raha tha, Abhi hum thodi aage chale tha ki Willy ek dukan ka samna ruk gaya.... uska bahar naam Likha tha Loham Weaponary Store.....

Willy : Lo aa gaye hum iss market is sabsa badiya aur sabsa bharosa mand dukan par, yahi vo jagah hai jaha sa iss galli ka naam pada hai..... aur hum bhi andar ki taraf chal diya....

Humna andar jakar dekha to vaha koi nahi tha.....  bus tha to alag alag tarah ka weapons aur armor..... Vaha kissi ko na paa kar Willy na awaj lagai.....Mr. Loham Junior 200..... ya baad mjhe baadmei pata chali ki vo unki pidi ka 200 va person hai jinka naam Loham hai..... Willy ki awaj sunkar ek insan kahi picha sa aage aaya...... uss insan ko dekh kar lag raha tha ki vo kaafi young hai..... aur abhi abhi yaha join kara hoga....

Mr. Loham: Ary Prince of ELF aap phir sa yaha, kya baat hai koi naya dhanush lena aaye hai kya?[Image: nbnQxGxaAfwHAzhfSeLZ.png] aur aaj maharani nahi aayi.....

Willy : Hello Loham, mei aaj apna liya yaha nahi aaya hu...... mei to mera dost ka sath aaya hu..... aaj inko aapka weapons aur armor ki jarurat hai..... to jara bataye ya kiss category mei hai.....

Mr Loham: Kuch der unhona mjhe bhut dhyan sa dekha aur fir bola..... chalo dekhta hai tmhara liya duniya ka kunsa armor bana hai....... kunsa armor tmhai chunta hai.......
Itna kaha kar unhona apni chadi nikali aur ek wall ki tarf kuch mantar padhkar chadi ghuma di...... magic ki awaj sa diwar vaha sa khisakna lagi aur ek badi si jagah humara samna aana lagi..... puri diwar vaha sa hatna ka sath hi vaha par humna dekha ki har taraf glass ka cover kiya hua armor tha aur har armor chamak raha tha..... unko dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki inn armor mei magic hai......

Ek baar fir Loham ki awaj aayi.... chalo dekhta hai kunsa armor tmhai chunta hai...... aur essa kaha kar unhona ek glass mei sa ek armor nikala aur usse mjhe pehana diya aur khud mjhc dhur khada ho gaye..... uss armor ko pehanata vaha bhut shor hona laga..... jiska chalta Mr. Loham nai usse nikal kar kaha nahi ya nahi.... chalo kuch aur dekhta hai..... essa karta hua unhona mei 4 armor pehna diya par koi bhi mjhe set nahi kar raha tha.....ya dekh kar mjhe lagna laga shayad mera liya kuch nahi bana hai...... Par Mr. Loham na ek baar fir kuch mantar padh kar meri taraf apni chadi ghuma di, jisse mjhe kuch nahi hua par Mr. Loham ka face par ek mushkurat aa gai,,,,, aur vo chilata hua bola,,,,, tum yahi ruko mei abhi aaya.....aur vo ya kaha kar jaha sab armor laga tha uss taraf bhag kar jana laga.... aur kuch andar jakar ek gali mei mud gaye.....

Shubham: Inko kya hau??? ya to essa bhaga hai jaisa inko koi khazana mil gaya ho....

Willy: ha yar, meina bhi aaj tak itna khush aur essa bhagta hu Mr. Loham ko nahi dekha....

Hum bus vahi khada unka intezar kar raha tha ki koi 10 minute baad Mr. Loham aata hua dikha aur unka haath mei ek armor tha aur unka face mei ek essi khushi jaisa ki vo kisi competition mei jeet gaye ho....

Mr. Loham: Ya lo isse pehan kar dekho...... vasa to meina jabsa ya dukan sambhali hai meina aaj tak iss armor ko kisi ko accept karta nahi dekha hai..... par lagta hai aaj ya tmhai hi milega....

Shubham: mei unka haath sa vo armor lekar pehanta hua, unsa ya puch baitha vasa aap kitna samay sa iss dukan ko sambhal raha hai.....

Mr. Loham : jada nahi yahi koi 5000 saal sa.....

Shubham : unki ya baat sunkar mei to jaisa behosh hi hona vala tha, jiss insan ko mei abhi javan samaj raha tha vo 5000 saal sa bhi jada bada tha..... ya sunkar mei bs sochna laga sahi mei ya jagah kaafi khatarnak hai..... vahi dusri taraf Willy Loham ki baat sunkar hasna laga tha....

Meina jaisa taisa khud ko sambhal kar vo armor pehan liya aur uss armor ko pehanta hi vaha par tej hawa chalna lagi aur ek madhur sa geet bajna laga, ya koi 1 minute tak hua hoga aur uska baad sab shant ho gaya...... Iss Shanti ko bhang karna ka liya Mr. Loham ki awaj aayi..... Finally iss armor ko iska malik mil gaya hai..... ya armor bhut khaas hai....

Willy : Essa kya khaas hai iss armor mei....[Image: nbnQxGxaAfwHAzhfSeLZ.png]

Mr. Loham : Ya armor mei shield  ki koi jagah nahi hai...... iss armor ki tarah ek armor crore saal phele kissi ko mila tha, vo bhut bada yodha bana tha..... lagta hai iski kismat mei bhi yahi likha hai....., vasa ya armor isko Rakshak category mei chunta hai.....

Willy : Ya to bhut achi baat hai...... mera dost duniya ka sabsa bada rakshak bana maja aa jayega.....

Iska baad vaha kuch khaas baat nahi hui, Armor ki tarah mera liya koi 5 talwar aur 3 dhanush liya gaye..... par unko chuna mei jada samay nahi laga aur hum vo saman lekar vaha sa bahar aa gaye.....

ABhi ka liya itna hi dosto...... aaj raat mei ek update aur aayega jisma Willy aur uska baaki sabhi 6 logo ka introduction ho jayga aur sath hi kuch khaas logo ka aur thodi information school aur baaki chijo sa related jisse aage story samajhna mei dikat nahi hogi.....

Chaliya fir milta hai aage aur aapka comments ka intezar rahega bhaiyo.....

Agar ya story aapko pasand nahi aa rahi hai ya iska plot acha nahi lag raha hai to mjhe bata de mei isse band kar dunga, kyunki readers padh kar update ka bara mei nahi batata hai to lagta hai jaisa ya acha nahi lag raha hai.... agar essa hai dosto to bata de mei isse band kar dunga.....
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SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 19-03-2019, 03:23 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 19-03-2019, 03:26 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Nil199 - 19-03-2019, 04:41 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 20-03-2019, 12:13 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 20-03-2019, 12:09 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 24-03-2019, 11:56 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 24-03-2019, 12:02 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 28-03-2019, 04:22 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 06-04-2019, 11:56 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 07-04-2019, 11:49 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 08-04-2019, 09:06 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Samrattttt - 08-04-2019, 11:22 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 12-04-2019, 04:45 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 14-04-2019, 11:43 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 16-04-2019, 08:43 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 16-04-2019, 08:44 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 16-04-2019, 08:44 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 18-04-2019, 08:23 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 20-04-2019, 04:37 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 20-04-2019, 12:17 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 20-04-2019, 03:29 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 20-04-2019, 03:31 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Roslila628 - 20-04-2019, 11:25 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 23-04-2019, 04:12 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 24-04-2019, 01:18 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 24-04-2019, 04:51 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 26-04-2019, 03:00 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 01-05-2019, 01:16 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by srlk - 01-05-2019, 09:07 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 06-05-2019, 06:55 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 01-05-2019, 04:57 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 02-05-2019, 08:56 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 06-05-2019, 06:55 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Samrattttt - 02-05-2019, 11:07 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 06-05-2019, 06:54 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 02-05-2019, 12:52 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 02-05-2019, 12:53 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 02-05-2019, 12:54 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 04-05-2019, 03:34 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 06-05-2019, 06:54 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 06-05-2019, 06:47 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 08-05-2019, 04:14 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 08-05-2019, 12:00 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 10-05-2019, 05:50 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 11-05-2019, 10:33 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 12-05-2019, 02:32 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 13-05-2019, 03:37 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Who am I - 13-05-2019, 11:48 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 14-05-2019, 07:09 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 15-05-2019, 07:45 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 16-05-2019, 03:45 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 16-05-2019, 05:10 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 18-05-2019, 03:36 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Who am I - 21-05-2019, 03:32 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Rdxchaubey - 21-05-2019, 06:08 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Rdxchaubey - 22-05-2019, 09:33 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Rdxchaubey - 23-05-2019, 11:46 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 25-05-2019, 04:14 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 26-05-2019, 07:31 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 29-05-2019, 03:22 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 30-05-2019, 01:37 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 30-05-2019, 04:34 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 31-05-2019, 05:47 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 31-05-2019, 08:19 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 04-06-2019, 03:22 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Samrattttt - 04-06-2019, 06:22 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 09-06-2019, 08:02 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 10-06-2019, 10:20 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Rdxchaubey - 11-06-2019, 08:14 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 11-06-2019, 09:12 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 18-06-2019, 07:47 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Raj355407 - 20-06-2019, 11:28 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by shailu12345 - 20-06-2019, 02:19 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 20-06-2019, 05:12 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 21-06-2019, 09:03 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 01-07-2019, 07:09 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by shailu12345 - 01-07-2019, 12:07 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 06-07-2019, 05:25 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 06-07-2019, 06:33 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 11-07-2019, 01:13 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 12-07-2019, 08:02 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 15-07-2019, 06:22 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 17-07-2019, 08:14 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by shailu12345 - 18-07-2019, 07:03 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 26-07-2019, 10:55 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 27-07-2019, 01:45 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by shailu12345 - 27-07-2019, 11:06 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 07-08-2019, 05:18 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 10-08-2019, 06:59 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by shailu12345 - 10-08-2019, 10:35 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by dahiya242 - 16-08-2019, 11:23 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by shailu12345 - 16-08-2019, 12:55 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 16-08-2019, 07:56 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 17-08-2019, 10:10 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by vickydoner - 19-08-2019, 06:00 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by abhi_mishra_91 - 25-08-2019, 09:25 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 27-08-2019, 08:18 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by rabiakhan338 - 27-08-2019, 07:37 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 03-09-2019, 08:03 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by shailu12345 - 04-09-2019, 03:54 PM
RE: SHUBHAM - by vickydoner - 07-09-2019, 09:49 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Ashish_1982_in - 09-09-2019, 07:43 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by Ashish_1982_in - 10-09-2019, 07:05 AM
RE: SHUBHAM - by sabbhu07e - 14-09-2019, 09:18 AM
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