Revathi - An angel

[Herbiee]

This is a nice story and one of the best story in this forum.Especially that character Revathi is awesome.She is extreme hot and sexy and teasing everyone,made everyone hard.Revathi-Raj relationship make this story more interesting.This story writing skill is amazing.I liked that writing style,like a movie script.


But there are some negatives to this story.I want to say that too.This is just my opinion.
I told that I liked the writing style of this story but I don't think everyone liked it.This story presented as a script, scene by scene in disorder, is not understood by the average readers.This confusing them.They can read and race the scenes only. They never get the story.



And the second one is, this story characters are awesome but in this story each and everyone lust on Revathi. even her mother in law.All characters want to have her, this make this story worst.Make her a slave slut of raj or anyone, or make more secret relationships with other characters, or make wife of a cuckold husband... etc. Don’t make her as a common whore. That’s ruining this story quality.And That family is acting like a slutty family. if say your style, “keduketta kudumbam mathiri erukku”.
a perfect story should be keep that story quality too.