09-05-2021, 08:06 PM
(09-05-2021, 05:39 PM)PingpongDingdong Wrote: The story is going really good . Thanks mate for the best erotic story. I would like to make a request. Please create a situation, that could be closer to reality (may happen in reality or may not happen ), like how it happened between Revati and her husband’s friend. There was an emotion between the both. There was a reason why Revati had to compromise with the situation. Because she wanted to make the guy come out of his depression and help him out of it. That line was too good. Just don’t make Revati fall for sex. Just a request. But you have been doing really great job to ensure the smooth flow of the story . Kudos to your writing skills
thanks a lot for your appreciation sir, it mean a lot for me. i dont have ragav character in my original plot, but suddenly in a moment, i thought of introducing a new character. I made quite some effort with this ragav chracter, all other characters will try to seduce revathi to take her in their bed, while with raj, revathi will initiate the sexual moments, so i need this ragav charcter to be a mix of both, i need both revathi and ragav to complement each other in taking sexual initiatives in different situations, i also need to built the relationship with ragav and revathi in such a way that it has some diffentiation from revathi and raj's relation. i tried a lot of permutation and combination in designing ragav's character and came up with this situation, it is difficult for me to write, since revathi should give him the feel of priya, should show the love that priya showed him and at the same time, she have to make him forget priya, it took quite some effort to write these updates...
i was really happy reading your words, i could feel all those efforts i put in conveyed to the reader in the same way i expected.
Yes, revathi will not just fall for sex, she will fall for love...
thank you, once again.