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Adultery Kʜɪʟᴀᴅɪ - ʙᴀʙᴀɴ
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(25-04-2021, 11:26 PM)Baban Wrote: Ajanmol bhai is story ka attraction tha iska har ek fact. Ek dusre ke saath relationship. Hero aur sanjana ka relation kya hai yeh toh aap aakhir mein jaan hi gaye jo ki is story ka highlight tha. Ab jab sab sach samney aa gaya hai tab kya next part mein woh mazaa ragega? I dont think so.

You know ke main sirf sex scene ke liye story nahi likhta, balki story ko develop karna hai mera asli
lakshya hota hai. Ab agar main is story ka 2nd part likhu bhi toh sibaye sex ke aur kuch story nahi rehega. Kyunki kiska relation kiske sath kya hai woh already hum jaan gate hai. Yeh story 1update ka hi demand karta tha.

But agar koi accha idea deemag mein aye toh is story ka sequel likhunga . And thank you very much merey is story ko parney ke liye❤

Perfect ending tha baban bhai agla kuchh esha hi story laao
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Kʜɪʟᴀᴅɪ - ʙᴀʙᴀɴ - by Baban - 25-04-2021, 01:58 AM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Avishek - 25-04-2021, 11:48 AM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 25-04-2021, 02:13 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Udaybhanu - 25-04-2021, 12:13 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 25-04-2021, 02:13 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 25-04-2021, 10:36 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Ajanmol - 25-04-2021, 10:36 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 25-04-2021, 10:47 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Ajanmol - 25-04-2021, 10:49 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Ajanmol - 25-04-2021, 11:00 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 25-04-2021, 11:26 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Udaybhanu - 26-04-2021, 08:47 AM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 26-04-2021, 12:15 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 26-04-2021, 12:21 AM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by vat69addict - 01-05-2021, 06:31 AM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 01-05-2021, 12:33 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 03-05-2021, 11:23 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 08-05-2021, 10:17 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 04-08-2021, 12:05 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 11-08-2021, 11:35 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 10-09-2021, 08:23 PM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by vigkad7891 - 11-09-2021, 01:12 AM
RE: KHILADI - short story - by Baban - 11-09-2021, 06:49 PM
RE: Kʜɪʟᴀᴅɪ - ʙᴀʙᴀɴ - by Baban - 11-12-2022, 12:43 AM
RE: Kʜɪʟᴀᴅɪ - ʙᴀʙᴀɴ - by xkaran - 11-12-2022, 02:09 AM
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