20-04-2021, 11:44 AM
(19-04-2021, 10:05 PM)Desmond Miles Wrote: I DMed you this same thing 2 days before, brother.. But since you might not be taking time to read messages on this site, thought of sharing it directly here..
I know u just want to maximise the plot further with adding Ammu's dumb experiences.. Its the hottest element of the story too.. So continue doing that only..
My suggestion is that, even if she realises our hero is using her, don't leave the concept of dumbness from her..
1. You can add scenes inside her house with him doing something naughty and kinky with her while her parents are in other rooms unaware of it.. (maybe while watching the TV, in kitchen, terrace etc) And randomly aswering the parents's questions (could be even double meaning) while they are having fun.. like the 'Sneaky Sex' in porn..
2. Later on, after some more sexual experiences with him, make Ammu's mom also join in on their fun.. (As she's also having kinky escapades with our hero) But with Ammu's father not releasing it.. It will be too much hot at that point in the story.. (But don't need incest between Mom and Daughter, just have some fun between the 3 of them, that's all )
Hope you consider this suggestions in the future updates, bro. Have a nice day to you.
Hi - saw your message in inbox and tried to reply but you've disabled private messages and so not able to send you anything.. all the viewer's response and imaginations are noted and will try to add them if possible through my flow of writing and narration.. it depends on the situation & Ammu will be the prime concept for some time and involving her mom is not suitable for now.. I think..