16-04-2021, 11:18 PM
(16-04-2021, 11:08 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: First of all thankyou sean bro fir coming my thread nd gave me valid point out.....i m veryhuge fan of u and mai chha kar ke bhi aap jaisa likh nahi paaunga ...fir bhi koshis karunga ki aap jaisa 10% bhi likh sakku.....thankyou so much bro.....
No need to underestimate yourself in order to praise others.Thanks.
Coming to the story.To be honest I didn't like the way you described Vandana's figure.I don't mean to body shame,but I didn't like that you made her belly chubby.Whether anyone likes it or not,but the bitter truth is a woman looks more appealing and seductive when her tummy is flat.It is another thing to be curvy and another thing to have fat belly.Being curvy has nothing to do with fat belly.
Anyway that was just my thoughts that I expressed.Continue with the good work.