11-04-2021, 03:21 AM
thode personal problems ke karan update padhane nahi mile..2 month ke baad story ke update padhe..bahod badhiya story mein twist laye hai...mai to imagine bhi nahi kar sakta ki story ke itne bhi angle ho sakte hai..hats off bro..really super fantastic update..????
story mein jab flash back angle hota hai to writing difficult hoti hai aur story ka flow bhi maintain karna hota hai aur aapne to isme mein kammaal hi kar diya hai..bhai 7 lakh views ke liye congratulation aap jaldi 10 lakh view bhi cross karoge..??
ha bhai aur aap basement ka scene dal rahe ho muze lag lag raha ki namrata us basement wale admi ke jaal mein kaisi fasi ye bhi explain kiya to behtar hoga...
RAGA KA story wala episode bhi bahot seductive hai aur namrata ka submissive character aur kisi ka man nahi dukhana, hurt nahi karna ye qualities iss RAGA ke episode mein bhi dikh rahi hai jo SAVLA aur BIRJU ke episode mein dikh rahi thi..
muze Karan ka character utna accha nahi laga..ha aur namrata jaisi ladki ko blackmailing ya jabaradasti karna ye avoid kar sakte ho dekhana...
abhi ka character supporting ke liye accha hai..wo class topper hai aur use sex se jyada uska padhai mein man hai isliye namrata ke permission ke baad mein bhi wo uske saath kissing ke ilawa jyada kuch nahi karta isliye namarata use dur jaati hai ye bhi likh sakte ho..?
bhai suzav acche lage to dekhana please bura na manana..and thank you for your continuous update..story chalu hoke dedh saal se bhi jyada time hua lekin abhibhi story ke liye excitement aur lagav badhata hi jaa raha hai..??
keep updating...take care..?
story mein jab flash back angle hota hai to writing difficult hoti hai aur story ka flow bhi maintain karna hota hai aur aapne to isme mein kammaal hi kar diya hai..bhai 7 lakh views ke liye congratulation aap jaldi 10 lakh view bhi cross karoge..??
ha bhai aur aap basement ka scene dal rahe ho muze lag lag raha ki namrata us basement wale admi ke jaal mein kaisi fasi ye bhi explain kiya to behtar hoga...
RAGA KA story wala episode bhi bahot seductive hai aur namrata ka submissive character aur kisi ka man nahi dukhana, hurt nahi karna ye qualities iss RAGA ke episode mein bhi dikh rahi hai jo SAVLA aur BIRJU ke episode mein dikh rahi thi..
muze Karan ka character utna accha nahi laga..ha aur namrata jaisi ladki ko blackmailing ya jabaradasti karna ye avoid kar sakte ho dekhana...
abhi ka character supporting ke liye accha hai..wo class topper hai aur use sex se jyada uska padhai mein man hai isliye namrata ke permission ke baad mein bhi wo uske saath kissing ke ilawa jyada kuch nahi karta isliye namarata use dur jaati hai ye bhi likh sakte ho..?
bhai suzav acche lage to dekhana please bura na manana..and thank you for your continuous update..story chalu hoke dedh saal se bhi jyada time hua lekin abhibhi story ke liye excitement aur lagav badhata hi jaa raha hai..??
keep updating...take care..?