05-04-2021, 12:26 AM
What A Fabulous Update.Aapke writing ki jitani tariff karu utani Kam Hain.
Firstly brilliant build up scene between Namrata and Raga,the way you describes the situation with pics is inch perfect.The conversation between Raga and namrata was good,and Raga somewhat reminds about the character of Birju.You didn't wrote sex scene between Namrata and raga in 1st meeting woh bahot acha laga bilkul reality jaisa laga.
Then Comes the best part of the story Stranger Buddha calling Namrata and inviting her to his room.
Woh Buddha toh Harami Das hoga .
Interesting call conversation between namrata and das on phone.Ab ye janana bahot interesting hoga
Ke Uss buddhe ne Namrata ko asali namrata kaise dikhayi??Isape toh lamba episode banata Hain boss kyunki pehali meeting main to Buddhe ne namrata ko usaki sundarata Nahi dikhati hogi?Aur namrata pehele usase jab mili hogi toh wo Shy rahi hogi Aur kaise buddhe ne use dance performance Ke Liye manaya hoga janana interesting hoga.
Aur iss sab main ye secret abhi Tak Nahi open hua Hain Ke namrata ko chudai ka pehela lesson sikhaya kisane hoga??
Ab aage Kya hota Hain dekhana interesting hoga.Story past Aur present main bahot achi jaa rahi Hain.Sabhi log namrata ko pane Ke Liye bekarar Hain ab wo kon safal hota Hain dekhana interesting hoga.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Keep it up.Kudos To your writing.
Firstly brilliant build up scene between Namrata and Raga,the way you describes the situation with pics is inch perfect.The conversation between Raga and namrata was good,and Raga somewhat reminds about the character of Birju.You didn't wrote sex scene between Namrata and raga in 1st meeting woh bahot acha laga bilkul reality jaisa laga.
Then Comes the best part of the story Stranger Buddha calling Namrata and inviting her to his room.
Woh Buddha toh Harami Das hoga .
Interesting call conversation between namrata and das on phone.Ab ye janana bahot interesting hoga
Ke Uss buddhe ne Namrata ko asali namrata kaise dikhayi??Isape toh lamba episode banata Hain boss kyunki pehali meeting main to Buddhe ne namrata ko usaki sundarata Nahi dikhati hogi?Aur namrata pehele usase jab mili hogi toh wo Shy rahi hogi Aur kaise buddhe ne use dance performance Ke Liye manaya hoga janana interesting hoga.
Aur iss sab main ye secret abhi Tak Nahi open hua Hain Ke namrata ko chudai ka pehela lesson sikhaya kisane hoga??
Ab aage Kya hota Hain dekhana interesting hoga.Story past Aur present main bahot achi jaa rahi Hain.Sabhi log namrata ko pane Ke Liye bekarar Hain ab wo kon safal hota Hain dekhana interesting hoga.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Keep it up.Kudos To your writing.