04-04-2021, 10:43 PM
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(04-04-2021, 05:23 PM)Radha sharma Wrote: Kya jabrdast update or suspence.. ye vo lecturer hoga i think.super like always ur skills and everything.
Bs jb kisi ka namarta ko dkh k seduce hona explain krte ho tab almost repeat mode mai hi chlta hai bht lamba. Words aage piche hoke.. jaldi clear krke vha se length kam hogi or story jyada likhi jaiyegi.. i know mai ache se smjha ni skti k kyu kehma chahti hu. Bt jsa aapko shi lge u go.. waiting for next
THANK YOU RADHA FOR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION
ha i understand apko kya kehna hain and i am agree with you ki sometimes kuch things repeat hote hain but character development bhi jaroori hain . Agar main raga aur NAMRATA ke bich first meet main he kuch dikhaya hota toh voh illogical aur connect nahi hota apko . And NAMRATA ka bhi abhi developing phase chalu hain so i accept ki kahani ki phasing and movement slow hogi .
But good things takes time
Thank you for suggestions aise he COMMENTS kijiye ...aapke comments se mujhe kuch sikhne ko aur bat deliver karne ko asani hoti hain so thank you once AGAIN