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Adultery लघु कथा - मेरे विचार (with Pictures and Gifs)
(02-04-2021, 01:09 PM)Blackak.aa Wrote: Family erotica was worst in my eyes

(02-04-2021, 01:31 PM)Blackak.aa Wrote: I'm sorry to say ur story family secret seems baseless and it lacks to be called a thriller or suspense it's a very much bakwas. If u ur self read the story again u will notice the fact!!

Thank you so much Blackak.aa bhai... I will work on this genre cause I don't have any experience in it. Yes, it looks quite baseless cause I decided to use this genre in short story. This type of genres are for long stories and I'll refrain from using them in short stories to avoid confusion in readers.
I am really happy and motivated with your honest reaction and it'll surely help me to write better in future. Namaskar

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RE: लघु कथा - मेरे विचार (with Pictures and Gifs) - by Silverstone93 - 02-04-2021, 03:32 PM



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