01-04-2021, 10:29 AM
(31-03-2021, 10:33 PM)KASHIKA Wrote: Once again another great structure of writing jitni tarif karu utni kam hain aisa laga first episode slow build-up tha . But iss episode ne alag he raftar pakad liyi.
I mean kitna unpredictable present kiya hae namrta ka character vo bhi first update se
And ab to mano namrta ko pane valo ki race he lag gai
Karan
Professor dube
Raga
And Das vale mention ne surprise kar diya . Aese aur back details aage pdhne me mja ayega
And one more thing joh pdhke kuch laga
Namrta ne dono bhi bar Abhi ko answer nhi kia ki voh us jagh ko kese janti hae jaha vo kiss krne gye the
Kya namrta vaha pehle bhi ja chuki he agr ha to kiske sath ?
Maja ayega age keep writing
THANK YOU SO MUCH KASHIKA
Your explanation always on point
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