25-03-2021, 11:40 AM
(25-03-2021, 11:36 AM)bang333 Wrote: Super story. Really enjoyed every episode. Naan oru manaiviyaga irunthal, eppadi ellam irukka aasai paduveno, athe pol Vanitha irukiral. Continue panna valthukkal.
Suggestion: Please take long time to explain the situation. Keep Vanitha only as an exhibitionist for as long as possible. This is what makes this story an interesting read. Dont make her a slut so soon. Also, i wish there were more encounters with the milk man and chandraseker before Vanitha starts to imagine them in bed. It felt bit rushed up and unrealistic to imaging them in bed just after 2 encounters.
Sure!thank you for suggestion bro