01-04-2019, 02:33 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-04-2019, 11:22 AM by pcirma. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Story has completed as I had expected.
However, there is a small discrepancy.
In পর্ব ১৩ you had written - ইশানকে নিজের ঘরে আঁকতে বসিয়ে ঘরে ঢোকে সুদেষ্ণা...
Then there is altercation between Souvik and Sudeshna
During this Sudeshna is saying - ‘আস্তে কথা বলো... পাশের ঘরে ইশান ঘুমাচ্ছে...’
Please check.
Repped you.
However, there is a small discrepancy.
In পর্ব ১৩ you had written - ইশানকে নিজের ঘরে আঁকতে বসিয়ে ঘরে ঢোকে সুদেষ্ণা...
Then there is altercation between Souvik and Sudeshna
During this Sudeshna is saying - ‘আস্তে কথা বলো... পাশের ঘরে ইশান ঘুমাচ্ছে...’
Please check.
Repped you.