19-03-2021, 06:07 AM
(15-03-2021, 09:26 PM)Pativrata Wrote: Guys.. I Have lost touch and may not be doing a very good job at story telling.. Do let me know ur inputs.. BTW Plot would be slow and there is no way I can change that. REST I am open for constructive inputs.. Feel free to cmnt
Pativrata, you are doing just great with this kinky story! Just don't let it go midway. Even smaller updates will do whenever you get time. Please don't cum under any pressure of impatient readers.
Yes, do build the plot slowly, just as you are doing so well now. Keeping putting in lots of dialogues and emotions of the players. Eg. what's going on in the mind of Pappu ji when he realizes that these girls are clearly flirting with him. And how his starved Bihari lauda stiffens at the thought of it!
Luv u, dost!
pylode