13-03-2021, 06:45 PM
(13-03-2021, 03:55 PM)Mgaya Wrote: Brother... you are going nice but too slow..
bura mat manana...this is not to demotivate you...but 1 month k baad ke update ka size comparatively bahot chota hai... aur story main abhi bhi kuch hota nahi dikh raha hai..
i know story writing takes time ... but please consider this..update size ya interval dono main se atleast ek hi bada rakho...not both
Thanks for writing for us
Bhai isbar mujhe jyada samay nhi mila isliye short update diya hu.... Agla update thoda time legega par bada update dunga....with more thrilling... Thanks for appreciation