13-03-2021, 05:18 PM
Dear Seenu/Raj,
I was kind of mad at you, the stories direction changed so rapidly I could not just handle it. Just like Red Wedding in GOTR, I couldn't digest the direction changes. However I read again, from where I left off and you are doing a great job. Do I still like the direction, I am hesitant about it. However I feel as a writer you are doing a great job getting your readers involved in the story. It is more than an erotic story. For that I give kudos to you. Also how you are bringing around the story, I really like it.
Now I hope there are more erotic scenes ;) . One of my favorite scene when I read again (only the new ones) is the one with Kathir and Nisha in the outside.
Take care
I was kind of mad at you, the stories direction changed so rapidly I could not just handle it. Just like Red Wedding in GOTR, I couldn't digest the direction changes. However I read again, from where I left off and you are doing a great job. Do I still like the direction, I am hesitant about it. However I feel as a writer you are doing a great job getting your readers involved in the story. It is more than an erotic story. For that I give kudos to you. Also how you are bringing around the story, I really like it.
Now I hope there are more erotic scenes ;) . One of my favorite scene when I read again (only the new ones) is the one with Kathir and Nisha in the outside.
Take care