09-03-2021, 04:20 PM
(08-03-2021, 10:21 PM)Newdevil Wrote: I read your story from scratch to endin one day. It seems to be a good story. Nice build-up initially, them carried that well also but you did skip the main thing of story for which the entire built up was there. And now you are saying too much sex does not seem good. Ok i acknowledge that but before finishing the story you must have give us the episode regarding brutality with shobha.
Overall story is good but your style of ending makes our entire story reading efforts useless.
Picture abhi baaki hai :-) Keep reading. The story has a lot of potential and I will be posting next few episodes.
Ravi Shikha
** I am fascinated by erotica as a genre in fiction. It is my ambition to publish my works of erotica as e-books on Amazon.in and Kindle. You will find me there too under this pen name. For the price of a coffee on Amazon, or for free on Kindle Unlimited, you can read my ebooks.
** I am fascinated by erotica as a genre in fiction. It is my ambition to publish my works of erotica as e-books on Amazon.in and Kindle. You will find me there too under this pen name. For the price of a coffee on Amazon, or for free on Kindle Unlimited, you can read my ebooks.
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