09-03-2021, 01:47 PM
I know many readers may not feel the kinkiness anymore as it was supposed to be a story of a woman who commits adultery and of course for the audience who came in because they were much interested in such sex than direct romance, these updates could be disappointing though there is no flaw in writing.
At this moment we have to see it as a way for the author to conclude the story in the style he wants to rather than how the readers want it to progress.
In his previous 2 stories, the women remained to be excited by extramarital sex and their characterization justified it whereas in this story, Nisha's character is such that even when she committed adultery with Seenu she didn't want to do it again and when she felt she was getting addicted to it, she took the opportunity to formally divorce her husband and marry Seenu to make their relationship legit. Now that she understood the kind of person Seenu was and replaced the place in life for Kathir, it is natural that the story will only have their intimate scenes as the characterization of Nisha is not that of a slut but a disciplined woman who goes off track for a minor bit in her life and regrets that one mistake.
Comparing her character with that of Vandhana and Kamini the lead characters of the previous stories, she is not just interested in sex but having a REAL intimate relationship with one person. So readers better understand these traits and wait to see what the author will unfold in the upcoming episodes.
As a story, the flow is remarkable and professional. Kudos to Dubai Seenu bro for the effort you have put into this story.
At this moment we have to see it as a way for the author to conclude the story in the style he wants to rather than how the readers want it to progress.
In his previous 2 stories, the women remained to be excited by extramarital sex and their characterization justified it whereas in this story, Nisha's character is such that even when she committed adultery with Seenu she didn't want to do it again and when she felt she was getting addicted to it, she took the opportunity to formally divorce her husband and marry Seenu to make their relationship legit. Now that she understood the kind of person Seenu was and replaced the place in life for Kathir, it is natural that the story will only have their intimate scenes as the characterization of Nisha is not that of a slut but a disciplined woman who goes off track for a minor bit in her life and regrets that one mistake.
Comparing her character with that of Vandhana and Kamini the lead characters of the previous stories, she is not just interested in sex but having a REAL intimate relationship with one person. So readers better understand these traits and wait to see what the author will unfold in the upcoming episodes.
As a story, the flow is remarkable and professional. Kudos to Dubai Seenu bro for the effort you have put into this story.