30-03-2019, 11:29 AM
Great going Pinkbaby.If possible keep the story focused on a single woman.No need to involve other female characters as it dilutes the story and turn it into an unnecessary fuckfest.You are a proven writer so I don't need to say much.Keep writing.


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