Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[Anvesharonny]

Thank you so much my brother for your honest feedback . Yes i accept your opinion on Suchita some readers really like Suchita-bhikari theme and kuch logo ko nahi connect huva... because of realistic theme


But my writing basically depends on realistic thing and that time main kuch alag karna chahta tha . 


I know NAMRATA is heroine of story . But as a  writer i like suchita's character . Because SUCHITA ko likhne main ek alag he maja aata hain.



And as a reader i know value and importance , emotions of NAMRATA's character.


Ab jyada kuch na bolte huve aapke iss comment ke liye dil se thank you . 



Aur aise he suggestions and feedback dete rahiye . Because aapke comments se samjta hain ki story kaha tar samjhi hain aur main jo likh raha hu uska value ho raha hain ya nahi 



Once again thank you so much

Agree with you completely.Your story is very relastic and relatable.Everthing happening in the story have a reason behind it unlike other stories where stranger or hero comes started seducing female characters and fucks them and female characters becomes slut,that is why we reader love and enjoy this story for realistic situations.
And here I will share what I think about namrata and suchita's character.If you think or describes sex as ocean then Suchita is champion swimmer of this ocean.She knows how to swim in sex ocean and what is going to happen at the end but on the opposite side there is Namrata if you imagine her as young sanskari virgin teen then she will have curiosity about this ocean,she want to enter and swim in to this ocean but at the same time she will have fear about the ocean.Usako samunder main aana to Hain lekin kisake sath aaye ,Kya hoga enter karane Ke baad ye fear bhi hoga.So yeh dekhana bahot interesting hoga Ke kaun namrata ko iss samunder main lata Hain Aur kaise pehela sex ka anubhav deta Hain.
So if possible you can write past life of both namrata and Suchita simultaneously through their memory lens in next chapter so fans of both characters will enjoy this story.