Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

[Lollobionda]

Hi Manasi,

I'm now at chapter 34 and have to conclude (after reading the other versions by 
other authors) that your version is more or less a pschyanalysis.


The explanations are much too long and also dry.

I have the feeling that you (perhaps from the subconscious and unintentionally!) 
When explaining the relationship between Kavita-Manu-Prem-Jaya-Gajra and the 
events general, indirectly looking for a justification.
That would be with the visit of Jaya, the long conversations and the attempt Kavita 
everything to pay back, what she did to Manu before quite clearly.

I think that one should not fight injustice with another injustice and clear. 
In the end, it is about a partnership and about mutual love. (even if this love is a little unconventional !)

Let the events in this relationship a little free run WITHOUT the long psychoanalysis but more love and erotic. 

A little cuckolding WITHOUT humiliation and disrespect will do the story good and make
it more charming and interesting...

I look forward to the coming chapters.


Greetings from Berlin - Germany



Lollobionda


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