Misc. Erotica மீண்டும் சிறு கதைகள் - முதல் கதை - என்னங்க, அது பரவாயில்லையா? 2 .) மறைவில் இருந்து

[lacksidal]

You are one of the best going around. And the one who writes logically. All your stories ends with a full stop with scope for a new beginning for the characters.

But I feel the emotions in the story is not settled down and edge is sharpened at the end. And also one of your strong point is the way you sketch the characters. I feel the vidhya character was not sketched out completely. For the end you have given, the alpha shall be vidya not varun in my opinion.

And also Ranjan has not embraced the cockholdery completely as per your end. He was somewhat subdued and comprimed to accept. And he will be subdued only till varun was present in their life.

What will happen once varun moves out of their life?
What will be the equation between husband and wife?

And few more un answered questions.

As usaual, you wrote it well. You make this space better.

Congratulations.